must fill in

Dude...that's rather offensive!

ok ignoring the expletive (relatively easy to actually seeing that the rest of the pic almost swallows it up), i'll say that i like the use of primary colours
also it's hard to tell whether you intentionally obscured part of her face (ie either show more or less of the face than you have)

finally, it's time to change your shmood to red

And the point is? YOU CAN DO BETTER. Be more imaginative, work that expletive into the shot more. Just a fun shot anyone could take.